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图表类作文

——顾家北雅思写作

★★★图表类作文要点:

Pie/line/bar chart,table,flow chart,map

总:总结和归纳段,表格最高值,数值之间对比,趋势(上升和下降)的归纳

步骤:确定图表类型(动态&静态)、确定时态、确定主要信息(最高值、趋势、对比等)、分段、阅读信息的顺序(从大到小)、句子结构变化、连接词、词性、语法错误。

☆☆☆动态图表要点:

A. 从数值比较高的对象开始说起,关注比较高的数值的对比趋势;

B. 对比对象分类级别:1.国家和地区;2.男女、年龄段等;3课程、能源等。

★★★重点页码:P284-285,P291-295,P297-303

★动态图表(比例变化)

The charts compare the proportion… …in China in2019.

The pie chart present findings/information in terms of/about that

Although the proportions of…dropped from to…

The availability of…

One quarter of… …

Rating this highly in 2000,in contrast to only 5% in 2010

The percentage of… …more than tripled from 5% to 18% in 2000,by which time,this factor had become the third most common reason for.

… …is also a significant…,didn’t change remarkably.

In contrast,there was a dramatic declinee in the percentage of

Overall,A and B became increasingly important considerations C in China while C were of less concern.

In terms of the number of males and females who

Respondents(调查对象) findings(发现,调查结果)

★动态图表(数值变化)P264

Be less important in

With the figure rising more than 8 fold to 20%.

The amount of… …increase significantly from…to…,while

The figure for…declined in both countries to 2.

The proportion of…saw a different trend in these two countries,increasing slightly to 20 in France but falling steely to 2 in British.

Be important to/in,dominated

☆☆☆静态图表要点:

★静态图表(两类表格同时出现)P267

The pie chart… …and the table… …

…was the primary cause of …,with around 35% of …

A and B were responsible for 30% and 40% of … respectively,while the remaining 10% was attribute to …

A had the largest proportion of … at 50%,nearly twice the figure for B and more than four times the level of C.

…be principal reason and the proportion of …by this cause in other two countries were significantly lower.

…was another problem/reason in…,causing damage to 5% of England,compared with 2% in France.

… is severe…,reducing the productivity of 10% of D,but the level of damage were lower in other two regions.

★静态图表(年龄表达)P271

…compares students of different ages in terms of

… …,wih up to 80% of those under age of 26 studying.This figure is significantly higher than the proportion of those who…

…show the changes in the age profile of two countries in two separate years,2000 and 2050

The gap between these two proportions narrows as students get older,and this figures for those aged 40 to 49 are the same.

Around 30% of students aged under 26

The figure drops steadily with age,

年龄表达方式:

With age,people are more likely to…

The proportions of …increases with age.

People under aged 24,under-24 age people,under-24-year-old people

People aged 30-39(between 30 and 39),people in their thirties,30-39 age group,30-39-year-old people

People aged over 50,people in their fifties,over-50 age group,over-50-year-old people

★静态图表(时态选择:线段图 连续的时间段)P273

The line graph shows the amount of…,as well as

… …throughout the period:despite fluctuation in the first 15 years,…rose steadily,and reaching 50 in 2030.

A was as important as B before,but the gap between these two fuels is likely to widen.While the amount of …is predicted to climb to,the figure for C will possibly remain stable at 20.

Maintain this level until…,after which the level will not experience any remarkable change.

Fall back to the 1980 figure.

Make up

一般过去时

过去完成时:出现 by+时间

一般现在是:图表中没有任何时间,描述某个时间区间的一个特点

一般将来时:be likely to,be projected/expected/predicted to

★动态图表(如何分段)P277

Over a period of 13 years.

Between 1996 and 2002.During the first five year period.iIn he previous period.

saw a biggest increase in…,despite a drop of around

… …show a similar pattern,declining by 5% in the first 5 year period but rising by 5% in the following 6 years.

While …even faster over the six years after 1995,… slowed to approximately 1%.

★动态图表(文字及数字的选择)P277

…provides data about…

The amount of …nearly doubled from num. to num. during the period.

The rising trend was (also) seen in Japan.

showed a marked decrease to num. in 2000,with no figure provided for the year 1980

…was noticeably lower in…

While the figures for…increased slightly to num.

…remained roughly unchanged.

…saw an increase.

最高值Highest,main,major,the most,the lowest/smallest

相似值Similar,the same,likewise,similarly,also

对比In contrast,on the other hand,different

比较值Larger,lower,bigger,smaller.

相似特征数值:similar to,at a similar level

不同特征数值:Different from/distinct from,substantial/striking diffenences between,the gap between.

对于三个时间点的作文,最后一个时间点的数据、第一年的数据均重要。

上升下降的替换:

上升

下降

程度轻微

climb

dip,slide,fall

程度一般

Increase,rise,grow

Decline,drop,decrease,diminish

程度激烈

Spiral,soar,rocket,surge,shoot up,leap

Plumb,plunge,plummet,nosedive,tumble,slump

程度副词替换

轻微

Slightly,modestly,moderately,marginally

显著

Considerably,remarkably,notably,noticeably,markedly,substantially,significantly

极为显著

Dramatically,radically,exponentially

★动态图表(总阶段)P285

动态图:最高值,趋势,对比

静态图:最高值,对比

选择重要信息总结

不要出现数据

不能使用in conclusion,however,therefore

不能表达个人观点

★动态图表(读数据+连接词)P289

Since then

There was an opposite trend in…

Nearly all forms of …

★静态图表(句型变化)P295

The biggest gender difference was observed

Gap was also clear

The gender gap was narrow.

Likewise,

★★流程图

重点页码P305

器具名词更改:

Grinder,mixer,heater ground,mixed,heated

动词

Process,deliver,transport,sent,transfer

名词:

Conveyor belt,bins,intended customers,

★工序图

A consists of 4 stages.

At the first stage.

…is subsequently/In the next step/Following this stage/…,constituting the third stage.

The flow chart shows the entire process of …/Here comes the second stage:

★生物生长

It takes TIM. to…

This stage lasts for TIM. …

After a period of TIM.

For TIM.

During a TIM. Period

Begin life(as eggs)… After five to six months… For approximately the next 4years

These baby fish during this time hatch into measure 数值 in length/weight/height/width

By the time… at this time… After five years… then… grown to adult size

Cycle starts anew

Migrate downriver open sea lay eggs

The fish passes through 3 distinct physical stages grow to maturity

Aquatic location

★★地图题

动词:show(illustrate),located,situated,sited,constructed,built,developed,surrounding

名词:maps(diagrams), footpaths,

重点页码P322-324

★开放区域

A is located on the western end of …

…to accommodate tourists.

…are connected by footpaths

All these facilities are linked by a road.

A circle of huts…

A restaurant,as well as a…,has been added in …

One remarkable change is…

Another significant change is that…

One main development is that…

A new addition is…

Comparing these two maps,we can see…

Another development is

Where引导的定语从句

And,while,there be

In summary,…has undergone…have been well preserved.

A railway was built from west to east.

on the eastern side of this area.

The development of the village continued next to the railway in the south-western corner of the area.

…located next to…

The major developments…took place around transport infrastructures.

★室内

单词:currently,at present,at the present time,one proposed change,one possible change,a new development,in the future plan

A vistor can enter the building from…,and then walk into the lobby area.

The section of…converted into…

The central area of the … is currently divided into 3 sections.

The entrance will be moved to …

Those who enter the …through…

This area is not part of …at present.

Show the potential change of …

——————————————————原答案

第一次考,今天出分,6分飘过,达到要求了,可以自己答了。。。

纯机械键盘手打。。。

复习基础:

先说基础,大二上学期六级压线飘过,大一、大二学校给我们专业开设了外教课,但也过了很多年的时间了,除了能记住和外教一起high,别的都忘了。虽然过了六级之后就没再复习英语,但考博的过程中,多少看了一个星期的英语单词。但家里刚发生变故,之前的博考又输的怀疑人生、自信全无,临时的决定只留给了自己一个半月的时间复习,否则9月口语又是换题季。学习过程压力山大。复习期间生病了一个星期,满打满算留下了一个月的时间复习雅思。不久前的博士大考,真是输的很惨,甚至自己觉得完全有把握的科目都输的一塌糊涂,这次烤鸭的过程中,无数次的回想起跌落的惨痛。

千万不要过于迷信各种宣传,如7天听力上7分,10天口语7分巴拉巴拉的,你不清楚造就这项奇迹的人基础到底怎样。

学习班:

很多人建议报班,看了很多网课班的宣传真觉得挺恐怖的,特别是有的举例说明有的学员报班之前复习多久都没有起色,一直在5-5.5分徘徊,也看了新东方网络的试听课,觉着很来感觉,有了很多次报班的冲动,家人甚至劝我是不是报个封闭的线下班,但感觉各地方的线下班的老师质量参差不齐,另外个人也对新东方有迷之反感,复习初期也确实不清楚竟然还有很多个人办的线下班,同时也不想投入太多的钱,最后还是选择相信自己的学习能力,就拿报班的预算给自己卧室装了一台空调,夏天吹着凉风复习,也算给家里添加了固定资产。但还是感觉应该根据个人情况选择,如果想考高分的、自制力弱一点的,线下班还是能提供一定的技巧的。还是需要根据个人情况选择,小马过河的故事小学的时候就学过。特别是微信里通过知乎什么的各种渠道加的培训班老师,每周五都会朋友圈报喜,某位同学一个月提升多少分,真是在自我怀疑的过程中前进。

学习材料:

看硫磺蛋的视频,根据她的建议,下载了雅思哥、扇贝单词、雅思考满分、轻听英语、BBC英语,大学老师也推荐了小站雅思,但最后用到的只有雅思哥、小站雅思和有道词典(办了一年的有道会员,可以看新牛津的英英解释)刷APP里题的时候,一直赶不上平均正确率,总感觉自己是拖后腿那个。可能做听力和阅读真的有技巧吧,看很多人英语并不是很突出,听力很轻松的就上7,阅读能上7.5,真是羡慕嫉妒恨。

复习的纸质材料,买了一本新东方的乱序版单词书(绿皮的),在咸鱼买了一套盗版的剑雅4-14(花了60软妹币包邮,香港问题如此甚嚣尘上,坚决拒绝给大英投资),张满胜的7本语法书(最后只看了1本半,建议可以把高中语法书翻出来看一下就够了),顾家北作文绿本和橙本(绿本很管用,复习了一半,但小作文全看完了,还压中了室内的作文题,橙本只背了最后的21页词伙),王陆听力买了单没用上。

学习计划:

开始想狮子大开口,每天一套真题,但试了几天感觉效率很低,后来就制定了比较详细的计划,分为“真题日”和“复习日”。1个真题日,2个复习日为一轮,每天7:00起床到9:00背单词和词伙。真题日的9:00-12:00做一套真题的听力和阅读,并总结阅读改错,13:30-16:00精听上午的听力,16:00-18:00作文,19:00-22:00口语素材准备,睡前再过一遍早上背的单词。复习日把做真题的时间改为复习单词和词伙,还能节省时间早点休息。

复习感受:

烤鸭真是一个人的战斗,没有办法得到鼓励,也没有办法像高考、考研那样群体的学习氛围。只求能擦边过。复习开始,也是不知道怎么办,请教了自己的大学老师,在B站看了硫磺蛋的视频,还有一位考了5次的做手账的UP主的视频觉得非常受鼓舞,特别是考5次的UP主,从3分到屠鸭,太励志了。直到考试前15天才开始准备口语材料,考前1天才算大概的准备完PART2的小故事,PART2车祸没说多少就被考官打断了。还有距离考试还有10天听力还是飘在5.5分。考试结束后,等分的日子里,每一天都难以睡的安稳,非常的痛苦。不敢出去玩,又难以沉心继续学习以防万一。

烤鸭是个很寂寞的过程,不敢刷微博,不敢看知乎,连支付宝喂鸡都觉着罪恶。但很感谢运气的帮忙和自己的付出,即便口语PART2车祸也赚到了5.5,特别是口语入场之前还遇到一位考点单位的老师,他平时办雅思班,主动告诉我考官是什么样,已经考完了哪些题,真的很感谢。虽然烤鸭比复习考研那个时候那么的坚定、努力稍稍差了一点,但也真的把烤鸭当做一次翻身仗来打,就是为了证明给自己上一次的失败只是制度和暗箱的问题,而并不是我的错。对于我来说,烤鸭确是一种对自己的证明,去打破之前对自己的否定。

所以,大家加油,沉心备考,别慌,我们能赢!


找到了那个5次UP主的视频

这个是硫磺蛋的视频


补漏分割线————————————————————————————————续写


机经问题:我参加的考试结束当天,雅思哥就放出了机经(说实话,我也是考前三天才弄明白机经是什么),4篇听力有3篇是原题,核对答案之后发现自己很多题都错了,甚至有数道题的题干、选项自己毫无印象,但最终出分却比估分高出1分,深度怀疑,即便真是原题,雅思出题机构可能选用了过去的录音,但题的具体内容有了更换。

作文问题:这次考试的小作文和顾家北的室内未来变化的作文题非常相像,感觉小作文大家可以做一个总结,我试过一共总结出5页A4纸就能解决所有小作文的问题,可以为大家省去很多的时间。大作文建议大家在看热点时事的时候,多多在心中提出自己的观点。这样在考试的时候能迅速的完成心中的提纲构想。

考试心态:必须承认的是雅思考试是有应试技巧的,就和我们上中学的考试一样,特别是看网上评论说,如果没有经过培训,英国本土人考雅思也不见得高分。这一点深表认同,大家可以试试我们国家出的汉语言考试(非母语为汉语的人士),一共6个等级,大家可以试试5级的卷子,我是非中文系的,但语文确实很好了(语文如果好+固执的人学英语很吃亏,容易摆脱不了汉语言思维),看题的时候很多选项也觉着模棱两可,需要通过其它选项协助排除答案。

所以,大家可以在B站上找一找盗版课,参考一下里面讲师的答题技巧,但最关键的一点是,无论别人讲的方法多么的牛逼、高效,一定要适合你自己才是好的方法。

之所以这么说,是因为各种方法都有不同的适合人群,这和这类人群的生长环境、家庭背景、经济条件都有关。比如我出国之前,在高中的时候,一直不能理解passport和visa的区别,出国一次才明白。所以大家可以根据别人提供的方法做出改进,具有自己的特色才是好用的。