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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:社会人口问题 Social Issues: Population

发布时间:2013-07-08 16:07浏览次数:1026
要求:

The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Over the past two decades,the composition of Atlantis city's population has a significantly change.As is indicated in this table,The total population of Atlantis city have a remarkably increase as time goes on.In 2008,the total population is double as much as it twenty years ago. According to the advanced trend of total population,we can infer that the population of different ethnic groups will keep a steadily growing,just as the table indicated.However,we will also find that the trend of population's percentage of different ethnic groups aren't identical with the population's numbers.In generally,the percentage of S.E.Asian,Indian and Polynesian keep booming,while Caucasian have a reverse situation.Why?Because the total population of Caucasian is the domination of Atlantis city in 1988.And within the twenty years,the growth of population became more and more slowly.On the contrary,the population of other ethnic groups kept booming compared with their small basic population in 1988.Therefore,although the population of different ethnic groups are always keep growing,we could get the percentage of Caucasian population has a decrease trend in the end.

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